Coke is unhealthy. It may be a great tasting drink. Think about all the sugar, calories, and caffeine could affect your body and health all three of those chemicals are harmful to your health there are a lot more chemicals in coke that can harm your body.
Coke may taste good but its bad. Although those unhealthy chemicals are in the drink. There what makes the drink taste so good. If it didn’t taste good people would never drink it. People who fall in addiction with this drink is because the UN healthy chemicals in the drink.
You waste money. When you spend two bucks on coke you do not realize that you will not have the drink forever. Once you drink the drink it is gone. You could have bought something that you needed with those two bucks. Instead of spending it on an unhealthy substance.
People don’t think about the consequences of drinking coke.
They just buy coke. The calories could add a couple pounds to your body that you do not want. The caffeine could keep you awake for a couple hours when you need to get up early. The sugar can do both add a couple pounds and keep you awake.
I personally love coke. But writing this paper helped me realize how harmful this liquid is to my body. I suggest that you save your money and buy a healthier substance. Just consider all the facts that I gave you to look at. And think do I really want to harm my body.
Kirra
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I personally dislike Coke and anyone reading your essay would probably think twice before drinking another Coke.
1. Coke is unhealthy.
2. Unhealthy chemicals, waste of money, consequences of drinking coke.
3.I agree with Kirra entirely.
By reading your paper, I make the 3 main points to be: first, a lot of unhealthy chemicals are in it. Second, it's a waste of money. And third, there are consequences to drinking coke. I agree, but generalize it to all soda. ;D
Kirra,
You did a great job making this a persuasive essay. I will definitely rethink buying Coke because of this! I liked how you not only gave evidence for why it is bad for you (i.e. because of all the calories and sugar), but also used ideas of why people like it (i.e. the taste and caffeine) in order to strengthen your argument by asking if it is really worth consuming all those harmful chemicals.
Kayla
CO 150-89
i don't like coke, so i agree with you. you gave me more reasons to not like coke
My favorite drink in the entire world used to be coke. After I started drinking more sprite and Gatorade i don't like coke as much.
Karissa
Kirra, coke is very yummy! I drink at least one can a day. My step-dad and I are pretty much addicted! It may be bad, and you have some good points, but until the sugar starts making me fat I'll drink coke like a dry sponge sucks up water! Good job on pursuaying people though! If I wasn't so addicted you'd probably have me believing and listening to all your facts.
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