Friday, January 22, 2010

Persuasive Paragraph

Ipods should be aloud in school. Listening to music calms people down. In class when the teacher hands out an assignment, and you’re working, it’s some times easier for kids to work listening to an Ipod. Or when your at lunch it’s nice to use it. Someones’ ipod are there person property. I don’t think kids should have their things taken away ether just because it’s a electronic. Ipods are not a distraction unless used improper ways. But I feel Ipods should be aloud in school.

Dallas

2 comments:

tim said...

thats pretty persuasive but i think you can do a little better. lol your a good friend.

gustavo r said...

i feel you. that pissesme off that we cant use them...