Friday, January 22, 2010

Persuasive Paragraph

I think ipods and cellphones should be allowed at school, but only as an incentive.I think if you told a teenager if they finished their work and then they could listen to Their ipod or text they would finish a lot faster. I think that during break you should always be able to listen to ipod/text it’s a good intermission and helps take your mind of things and be not as board during the next class.if kids have something to work for (i.e. ipod cellphone.) they will establish a work ethic and help them better to earn things instead of having things just handed to them. That is why I think ipods and cellphones should be allowed (conditionally)

Eli

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