Friday, March 12, 2010

Passion

Passion is many things,
It’s holding your one true love,
It’s loving your god above,
Passion is the hate you hold for that one enemy,
When the rage takes you and you can’t see,
Passion is happiness,
The time in your life when there is no pain,
And no need for anything else,
Passion is living in the moment,
But for some they never find that moment.



Dustin

8 comments:

tim said...

dustin, you have passion but i think you need to direct your passion towards something better than a moment. STAY COOL MAN!!!

monica said...

i agree that passion is when you live in the moment. its true that some people never find their passion.

Dallas said...

I like this poem
i think you did a good job
i like how you say passion is holding your one true love.

Nick said...

I think that you write what you feel and you have a good writing skells

jessica said...

this poem was awesome. i think passion for the most part is in the moment and you have to take that chance

Maryssa said...

Dustin, Passion really is many things. It will come and go and with god, it's up to anyone to have that passion. I believe that passion is also a time in your life when there is no pain. I can remember a few times in life without any pain! Great poem dude.

Chelsea said...

DUSTIN, good poem dude. I love the part that says "it's holding your one true love".

Kirra said...

I really like this post you show example of what each feeling i really like your example of rage.