Friday, October 23, 2009

Persuasive: Final Draft

Dear Wes, from James, whats up how are you doing? I just wanted
You no you are a great person. You are also a leader and not a follower
After all of our conversations , I found out you’re a person who cares
About life. My topic is on a convertible mustang, That is my dream
Car in life. They run good, gas is cheap, that’s how I think of it.

I think my tracker Wesley Mangum is a really good person. Because
He helps you have a better day when you are felling down or having
A bad day. Also we always talk about convertible mustangs. Because
It is really fancy and expensive. It is also really fast , it runs really
Well.

The motor hardly ever dies on you. When you are listening to music
You will notice how good the systen in the car works very well. One
Of my opinions is that it will smoke a mitsibishi eclipse in a race. The
Doors come up really easily. Some reasons why I didn’t like mustangs.

Because the motor won’t.


James

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thats a good choice of a car.I have a white mustang and i love it .I like how there made of steel not the stupied cheap stuff there making cars out of now.
Ashley H.

Maryssa said...

James, I also agree that Wes is a great person and a strong leader. It's pretty kool how you related a relationship or life to a car (even though I'm definitely not a Ford person.) But it is a pretty car to look at, I'm not gonna lie!

Anonymous said...

I like how you write. You have a good way of giving a visual of what your story is about.
Karissa